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Alex Jenkin's avatar

A really intense kind of momentum in this piece. The first of your short story pieces I’ve read too. Great work ❤️

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Alya's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! ✨️ the suspense was the driving factor, I'm glad you enjoyed it 🤗

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

My pleasure.. I like the way you parked a car pun in the response too 😅

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Alya's avatar

I couldn't help myself 😂

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

As long as you keep it within a limit.. you’ve gotta pump the brakes on that kind of reckless pun writing.

Otherwise you’re liable to give someone a breakdown or write yourself off.

You don’t want that kind of thing in your rearview mirror. It’s a slippery surface at the best of times and the last thing you need is for them to fall flat..

(I can say I wrote something today 😂)

Have a good one or should I say Goodyear🦄

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Alya's avatar

Bahaha this is brilliant 😂🙏

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